Introduction : Part of Developing Essay by Putri Libria

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Topic sentence : The best way to lose weight.

Thesis statement : you just have to follow the simple steps and excercises based on science naturally.

Introduction : Lately, there's a lot of people especially women who want to have an ideal body weight. Because of that, some of them go on strict diet and even do extreme sports to get the ideal body like their dreams, but apart from that, they didn't pay attention to the impact of the activities they carried out. There are so many risks that must be accepted when you did a strict diet, extreme excercise, liposuction, gastric surgery, hunger strike, it's just like torturing yourself. Even though there are safer way to do if you want to lose weight without having to accept bad risks, you just have to follow the simple steps and excercises based on science naturally.

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