(FINALTEST) Expressing Your Opinion Essay || The existence of beggars in Sukabumi by Gina Amalia

(Revisi)

  The presence of beggars in every city is sure to bloom. For example, beggars in the City of Sukabumi. They beg in various places in the crowd. For example, we often encounter in the market, at a red light or some are begging to the homes of residents. Their existence is actually not merely not prosperous, but indeed there are those who deliberately take advantage of his condition for profit. Various ways that beggars do to get a lot of money. Some beggars manipulate his condition. There are those who pretend to be blind until there are those who pretend to have stubby legs. Even more sad again there are those who rent babies to be taken to beg for heat in the sun to the cold of the night air. So that people are sorry to see it. Sad indeed, this is the phenomenon of the city of Sukabumi. But the exploitation of these children will obviously damage their future, become lazy and stupid because the opportunity for schooling is taken away by their parents to beg. Especially because physical disabilities can be used as a bullying to get money. 

In Sukabumi there are beggars who are mentally retarded. The beggar is begging at a red light on A.Yani street or strategically towards the citymall. Beggars in my opinion rather annoying. Because I have come across ways of begging he is somewhat forced. He spoke abysmally and while moving his limbs like shivering and knocking my car window tightly. It was somewhat pushy and very surprised me. If he hasn't been given the money, he keeps knocking on the window with all his might while talking abysmally and shouting. 

By the way he begged for the impression that he forced it, I think the person who first saw it would be surprised. Moreover, it happened on the highway that even young people or toddlers can see. I worry that if it continues like that, minors become traumatized by the way the beggar's interactions are. Because in general children under the age of growing up by following the movements he saw. A child's brain must record something he sees and is afraid of being copied. The child's absorption capacity is very important in this case.

Disrupting traffic on the highway. Yes, it must be very inhibiting. Because beggars are sometimes difficult to leave if not given money. When the green light is on, not a few people sound their horns. The name is the highway, everyone must have crossed the road a lot. Moreover, the road is indeed a road that is often traversed by people to make ends meet, for example, going to buy furniture at Citymall. Not to mention other riders in a hurry. I am also concerned about the safety of the beggar. What would happen if the beggar was hit by another motorist.

It can be concluded that the problem of beggars is a complex social problem. With various types and motifs. Not only related to beggars, but also has to do with the condition of the family of the beggar, the community and the government. Beggars are not only those who are elderly or disabled, but there are also those who become professions. Being a beggar is not only because of the economic crush, but because of the traditions of the community, certain moments, and the values professed by individuals can become their motives for becoming a beggar. And I hope that beggars throughout Indonesia can be overcome. Especially beggars in the mentally retarded sukabumi can be sought to know the origin of his and his family. What is the reason for the family to let someone who should be given special education be enslaved like that.





The Existence Of Beggars And Poverty Are The Main Problems ( REVISI )

  The presence of beggars in every city is sure to bloom. For example, beggars in the City of Sukabumi. They beg in various places in the crowd. For example, we often encounter in the market, at a red light or some are begging to the homes of residents. Their existence is actually not merely not prosperous, but indeed there are those who deliberately take advantage of his condition for profit. Various ways that beggars do to get a lot of money. Some beggars manipulate his condition. There are those who pretend to be blind until there are those who pretend to have stubby legs. Even more sad again there are those who rent babies to be taken to beg for heat in the sun to the cold of the night air. So that people are sorry to see it. Sad indeed, this is the phenomenon of the city of Sukabumi. But the exploitation of these children will obviously damage their future, become lazy and stupid because the opportunity for schooling is taken away by their parents to beg. Especially because physical disabilities can be used as a bullying to get money. 

In Sukabumi there are beggars who experience mental retardation. The beggar is begging at the traffic lights on A.Yani street or strategically heading for the city center. Beggars in my opinion rather annoying. Because I had found the way he was begging, he was rather pushy. He spoke harshly and while moving his limbs like shivering and knocking my car window tightly. It was rather pushy and greatly surprised me. If he hasn't been given the money, he keeps knocking on the window with all his might and then speaks disrespectfully and yells. for ordinary people may feel very disturbed because I also do. not everyone can accept the way he begs as if forcing. I saw the look on the face of other motorists who began to grow furious in my heart immediately believed that it was possible that the beggar was very annoying and annoying. I worry that there are other drivers who are very disturbed and emotional to the beggar and something unexpected happens.

Disrupt traffic on the highway. Yes, that must be very inhibiting. Because sometimes beggars find it difficult to leave if they aren't given money. When the green light is on, not a few people honk. It's called the highway, everyone must cross a lot of roads. Moreover, the road is indeed a road that is often traveled by people to make ends meet, for example, going to buy furniture at Citymall. Not to mention other racers who are in a hurry. I am also worried about the safety of beggars. What would happen if the beggar was hit by another motorist. if there is a traffic accident that causes the beggar to fall or even to a severe injury, then who can be blamed for this. if you have to blame one of them maybe it's fairly unfair. because maybe the driver has the right to drive on his street then beggars aren't supposed to ask for money to get to the middle of the road and have the right to survive by begging like that. confused who to blame.

It can be concluded that the problem of beggars is a complex social problem. With various types and motives and this is indeed the main problem in Indonesia, namely the problem of poverty. poverty in the economic field is still a problem faced by the community in a significant amount. even experienced by people who live not far from the national capital. Not only related to beggars, but also has to do with the condition of beggar families, communities and government. Beggars are not only those who are elderly or disabled, but there are also those who become professions. Becoming a beggar is not only because of economic collapse, but because of the traditions of the community, certain times, and values ​​professed by individuals can be their motives for becoming a beggar. And I hope that beggars throughout Indonesia can be overcome. Especially beggars in mentally retarded sukabumi can be sought to find out their origin and family. What is the reason the family let someone who should be given special education enslaved like that. therefore, efforts to alleviate poverty must be a work program that the Government works in the future. poverty eradication of their duties, his duties, inevitably, must continue to be done in order to fulfill a sense of social justice.

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